Andrew Brabo

The people I saw on my own time for traits

I see a woman who’s shaking, from the cold from trauma or withdrawals who knows, with a cigarette and sandy blonde hair. A bigger man who’s struggling to make it across the street while cars pass. He’s bald with a shirt t shirt that hangs above his bulging belly, and baggy pants. The elderly lady that passes by in her car going to far into the other lane, turning too wide and going through the lane as well, she has dull colors on, a very stern face that’s still as she goes by. Out of the people walking by  I notice a stranger with offset colors none matching and boney features, small as a twig, and carries a bag too big for anyone to carry making me think he’s got more weight on his shoulders physically and mentally.

 

The re-draft

I see a woman who’s shaking, from the cold from trauma or withdrawals who knows, with a cigarette and sandy blonde hair. A bigger man who’s struggling to make it across the street while cars pass. He’s bald with a shirt t shirt hanging above his bulging belly, and baggy pants. The elderly lady passes by in her car going too far into the other lane, turning too wide and going through the other lanes, she’s got dull colors on, a very stern face that’s still when he goes by. Out of the people walking by I notice a stranger with offset colors none matching and boney features, smaller like a twig, and carries a bag too big for anyone to carry making me think he’s got more weight on his shoulders physically and mentally

Do not list any features and try to go around like instead of blue say he has eyes color of ocean an etc

 

I see a woman who’s shaking from the cold or from trauma or withdrawals who knows, with a cigarette and hair with a sandy color. A man who’s above normal size who’s struggling to make it across the street while cars pass. He’s got a head as shiny and gleaming like there was none at all and a shirt too small with baggy pants that fit more. The elderly woman passes by in her car going too far into the other lane, turning too wide and going through the other lanes, she’s got dull colors on, a very stern fact that’s still when she goes by. Out of the people walking by in the hallway, I notice a stranger with offset colors none matching and muscles that seem to be stretching out too far, with a tiny body that would compare to a twig while carrying a bag too big for anyone to carry making me think he’s got more weight on his shoulders physically and mentally.