Andrew W. Brabo
Analysis
of anti-social media
There is much more to life than ignoring it by looking at
yours and others past on a phone when you can get together with those same real
people and relate life through conversations of text. It’s better to have a
room of people trying to catch up than to think about what to do and instead
look at your phone to see what others do. The author of the article “Why I’m
Anti-social Media” Ms. Carrie Kirk, brings great views on how she used to be a
heavy social media user, when she stops and starts focusing on the real things
around here in life and put down the social media. The article aims primarily
at the users of, mainly those how really on it heavily, due to the fact that
the author was getting depressed, anti-social, and distracted her from life.
What Kirk first states in her paper is how the first
reaction to the sentence right below the title saying “Fun fact: I hate social
media” would be “I can’t live without my Twitter/Facebook/Instagram”. This is
exactly how her audience of social media users would react and she brings up
great points on why the same people should start the withdrawal of over social
media use. She states how many times you have been with groups of friends
talking about the likes on your status or pictures when you could actually do something
with the opportunity and friends you have right next to you. When you use
social-media too often it also leads to depression while you’re not doing
anything and see how people are doing fun things, going out, have great
adventures makes you reflect like you’re not as well of as the people you know.
When it’s really the fact author Kirk brings up that most people don’t post
every little bad thing that goes wrong and make a profile seem more biased to
having this great life everybody gets to see. So in all the way she is
pertaining to the audience that she used to be a part of and explaining how
each way you see social media can influence your life when you use it too
often. She knows exactly her audience and how they are influenced like her but
she also gives ways on how to stop the social media way of thinking and using
by just her own accounts and it is more knowledge than the reader could take
from and apply to their life.
Leading me to the fact that Ms. Kirk shows the audience
how they miss life and the present when your viewing others life on a screen.
When your with a group of friends or family she brings up how the audience
looks at the phone instead of creating an opportunity just how she used to not
do. This appeals heavily due to the fact she knows what a user of social-media
does when they compare life and are sucked into their phone, they want to make
an opportunity. She goes through a process that most of us do when we look into
the facebook, and twitter and how we all can make moments instead of viewing
others moments. That in which is a huge
draw toward the reader making them reflect while seeing her views clearly
because the author and audience both have an exact account what she is talking
about. I’m not even a good user of social-media and yet I see so many examples
of this in places it makes you wonder why they don’t realize the life in front
of them and that’s more of what Author Carrie Kirk shows in her writing.
If the author had a better idea of the target reader she
couldn’t have been the author because she so well describes what social media
does to those used and drawn to the sites. She does, in vivid detail, point out
flaws of over use from depression, low self-worth from always comparing your
lives to the fake one’s online and how the audience misses the world. The
experience of her readers and how they can change she incorporates it all. She
aims right at the hard hitting facts that would make a user delete there
account recollecting her anti-socialness due to social-media through personal
stories that are relatable to the audience. How the audience was missing out on
the world like she did now can see there’s a better way just to ignore the
phone. Without her experience and ways she views life without social media it
exactly replicates the feelings and life patterns the audience goes through and
shows why social media does this to us and how to stop and enjoy real world
physical time and in essence is a perfect paper directing at her audience
getting so much across her audience and drawing, appealing, and giving
solutions to them fitting a paper perfectly.
Works Cited
Kirk, Carrie. “Why
I’m Anti-Social Media” HuffPost
College. TheHuffingtonPost.com, Posted online article: 10/09/2014 4:15 pm.
Accessed 11/05/14
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